Temple in the Stars – Part 1
Last week, I ended with a story entitled “The Children.” I’ve been having some severe difficulties finding traction on any story that isn’t Sci-Fi. I’m not certain of the cause, but my Friday post did not do well at all as far as page views or Twitter interest are concerned. Unfortunately, I don’t have enough of a reader base to have any other feedback to work with, so I’m pressing on with another Sci-Fi story.
Temple in the Stars is an idea in a long line of frequent daydream topics inspired by my love of a certain video game entitled Phantasy Star IV. The premise is actually rather simple: A woman has been given the opportunity to acquire enormous power. Will she answer the call, or choose to pass the responsibility to another and live her life as she had before? There will be dangers in either decision, so it’s a matter of principle to the main character. All I am adding to this is a backdrop of an advanced Sci-Fi culture for her to operate in.
With this particular story, I am narrowing the scope of my universe to include a single large station and the asteroid ring and gas giant which make up the immediate surroundings. Previous entries have focused on vast, heavily expanded human cultures. I think that’s an aspect of Sci-Fi that this story will take for granted, giving glimpses of the domination of human expansion with the sheer scale of operations and inferred information. I think that’s a good way to develop my writing with an eye for more advanced world-building. It’s important that I push my boundaries while I work. I cannot get complacent, I owe too much to my readers. Both the ones I have already, and the ones I wish to gather. I want this to be how I make my living, and how I am remembered. That requires growth, and with all growth comes pain and discomfort. That’s just life.
I took a huge step along the path of growth this weekend by self publishing my previous six part short story as an eBook on Amazon. It’s never easy to place your work on the chopping block to a larger audience, and I think that in order to gain feedback, I will need to step outside of writing Young Adult work for a little while. It’s more important that I create work that can engage a dialog than it is to wander aimlessly through story after story without having a gauge for my progress. I know that I’ve gotten better from the time I’ve started to now, but that’s simply gains realized by sheer repetition. Perfect practice is what makes perfect, and it’s impossible for me to find perfect practice working solo.
Without further introspection…
Temple in the Stars – Part 1
Her high respect for her father, who always made time to get to know each of his small army of children, ticked several notches higher as she learned all the daily habits which would be expected of her to maintain her license. This is no joke. If I skip even one of these, it could lead to complete disaster! As she read, she turned to the pad which held her personal assistant, Everett. A weird name for an AI to choose, but she had never been able to argue with his competence. “Everett, wake up buddy, I’ve got a lot of stuff we need to cover.” As usual, Everett cleared his throat before his deep, precisely enunciated voice sounded in her com implant “Absolutely Ashley, I am always available when you need me. I would like to point out that I was having a most wonderful dream however. Would you care to hear about it?” Ashley grinned at the question, knowing it was coming before he even asked it. Everett and his attendant com had been a gift to her from her dad at the age of eight. Even at such a young age, she was already shepherding the younger children and helping her mother handle the daily scheduling and chores for the house. For the last ten years, Everett had always been eager to share his latest dream with her. When she had the time to listen, she jumped on the opportunity. It was incredible what the organic circuitry which made up his brain would think up. His dreams are a thousand times more intense and involved than mine Ashley thought with her usual amusement. “Normally I would love to Everett, but there’s a lot of stuff that I need to plan out for this new gig. It would be a poor reflection on pops if his oldest child couldn’t hack it as an independent operator.” Everett’s voice sounded amused as he responded “Of course Ashley, you’re quite right. That would ruin his opinion of his children for sure.” She snorted at the implied joke, knowing better than Everett that her father would never think any less of her no matter what happened.
A few hundred new miners stepped off the train with her, and if the few dozen hovercarts in view were any guide, she guessed the shops would make a killing off this round of miners. Administrative officials were there to greet them as the exited the station and entered the main lobby of the uppermost level of the smelting station. Bright, cheerful men and women dressed in the same neon green suit each with their own AI Pads, they approached the miners to assist them in finding which transport would be delivering them and their gear to the section of the asteroid belt they would be calling home. Asteroid mining might be insanely profitable, but it was also an extremely involved process. Each miner would require their own light transport for the habitation and docking modules, as well as the three ships necessary to complete any mining. Spare parts, repair kits, and replacement engines took up the rest of the space as well as the storage module and shield generator array. Anyone who could manage the sheer amount of equipment required in a safe and competent manner was to be highly prized indeed.
To be continued…
Minerfully,
Justin